“Night Prayer at Binh Doung”
by Simon Peter Eggertsen

2024 Poetry of the Sacred Contest Grand Prize Honorable Mention

Confirmed in the slim night shadows,
a four-toed blue and gold dragon ridges

the tiles of the moss-glazed roof, ascends
to the slivering waxing Tềt moon, an off-center

crescent smile above the ageing temple. I watch
in the shadows as muted whonnnngs from

a squat brass bowl, struck soft by a straight
teak wand, and a staccato of loose leather

whoomphs from an old drum announce
the smooth evening entrance of a mother,

a daughter, one in yellow, one in white,
two subdued daisies, two days before

Lord Buddha’s birthday. Small hands lift,
quickly press smoldering, red-bundled incense

to straight, soft brows three times, forward,
then back. The glow throws a squinted tracery

into the air, like a child’s sparkler does on
the Fourth of July at Wildwood, embers writing

in an unknown alphabet new text for the prayer rolls.
They stand still, close eyes, shut out the world,

focus on now and the after. Their soft lips slow,
shape a chant, praise first, then move to flatter.

They loft four deep wishes to Lord Buddha,
push luck to the souls of departed ancestors.

Three repetitions will be enough this evening:
May we be filled with loving kindness; may you be well.

May we be peaceful and at ease; may you be whole..
Their waving reverence made, each time the incense less,

they leave an open set of spring flowers at each modest
altar, the surprise of pink peach blossoms, Hai loc!,

and two Vietnamese pears, their green shape bold
on the white of smooth porcelain. The light left over

ricochets off a brushed brass urn, marks the presence
of two suns, an earth and a moon in one place.

Finished, they whirl, drop their spirit money
at Lord Buddha’s feet, vanish through the door

like wisps of ash blown to the side by a shuffling
breeze. Taking with them a square of sticky rice

for their own good luck, they race home before
the twelve-toll bell strikes midnight, donnnng,

locks them out until the dawn. Safe inside at home,
they warm a pot of fragrant jasmine tea, ready the gifts,

single sprigs of spring blossoms, wait for tomorrow’s
first visitors, practice the ritual Tềt greeting to visitors

Tomorrow, the narcissus will bloom in Thủ Dầu Một.